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Former featured articleGeology of the Bryce Canyon area is a former featured article. Please see the links under Article milestones below for its original nomination page (for older articles, check the nomination archive) and why it was removed.
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October 16, 2021Featured article reviewDemoted
Current status: Former featured article

spelling?

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Is "ampitheatures" a typo? Google give two hits, one of which is this article. Markalexander100 05:22, 16 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Yep. I fixed it. Thanks for the note. --mav 05:49, 16 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Colorado Plateau(s)?

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I believe the correct usage is "Colorado Plateau", not "Colorado Plateaus" as in the article, as it is one geographic feature. Anyone have examples of usage to the contrary? Gwimpey 17:06, 16 Jun 2004 (UTC)

As our Colorado Plateau article states, that North American province is composed of many plateaus. This is also the usage I found in the main reference work for this article, Geology of National Parks. But yes, common usage does prefer the singular and that is why I located the article on the subject at the singular title. But the common usage is strictly not correct and gives an incorrect image about what the region actually is. So there is no reason why we should be incorrect in the dispayed body text and section titles. --mav 03:04, 17 Jun 2004 (UTC)

utah

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a mention of where bryce canyon is on this page would be nice.. i know you can click the link to the main page, but...

Done. --mav 03:39, 15 Jul 2004 (UTC)

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Nice article

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Hadn't looked in for awhile. Very informative article. Good work! Thanks, Pete Tillman (talk) 14:33, 19 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the compliment! :) --mav (reviews needed) 03:01, 22 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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I have reviewed this article as part of WP:URFA/2020 and I am concerned that it does not meet the featured article criteria anymore. I am concerned about multiple unsourced paragraphs (including the whole "Grand Staircase" section) and that none of the sources are pre-2007. Is anyone interested in fixing up this article? Z1720 (talk) 18:54, 16 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Claron Formation vs. Wasatch Formation

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The statement that the Claron Formation was once named the Wasatch Formation seems off. The summaries at GEOLEX indicate that the Wasatch Formation is still a valid formation across the Colorado Plateau, and that the Claron Formation correlates with the Wasatch Formation. --Kent G. Budge (talk) 18:06, 14 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]